This chapter has been removed, but will be posted again as soon as possible.
I am having the entire story reworked with my beta from the very beginning. I have removed all intermediate chapters up until chapter 33, so I hope for your understanding and patience because reworking this beast takes time.
omg omg i want to know what going to happen good job i cant wait for the next chapter!!:p
ReplyDeleteWow, another fantastic chapter. I said it before, you have such a natural writing style! Fantastic - can't wait for the next instalment!
ReplyDeleteI am reading your story, so far it is very good, i will comment as i go, thanks huggs i too am writing a story if your interested in reading it follow the link and let me know what you think...thanks
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To you above, thank you for your kind words. They mean the world to me and I am humbled you use your valueble time and read my story.
ReplyDeletePegasus - I welcome your critique, bring it on :-) and I will check out your story as soon as I have a moment to breathe.
Follow me on twitter - still feeling a little lonely over there :-)
The best to you all
also, I really like the three of them together. the two boys support each other well, whether they want to admit it or not
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