Elvirina belongs to the Thumánn people, a breed that appears human. Their secret society is set apart by their unique gifts, a very different way of life and lastly how they love their men. At birth, every Thumánn female is appointed a soul mate. At the age of seventeen, Elvirina is more than ready to start her adult life with her given soul mate– Joshwin. Living apart from their own people, but existing amongst humans, Elvirina and Joshwin are forced to change schools. A shift in their relationship occurs when Elvirina encounters the enigmatic Blake at her most vulnerable moment and must face the consequences.


Sep 14, 2010

Chapter 28: Blake


This chapter has been removed, but will be posted again as soon as possible.  


I am having the entire story reworked with my beta from the very beginning. I have removed all intermediate chapters up until chapter 33, so I hope for your understanding and patience because reworking this beast takes time.
Posted by Nelly

2 comments:

  1. jazminSeptember 14, 2010 at 9:40 PM

    omg really good cant wait for more keep on writing love this story amazing!!:p

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  2. MalinFebruary 24, 2011 at 1:30 AM

    Nelly! You got me all teary! This was the best chapter, so far. For me at least, who prefer the relationship between Blake and Elvie. They are so clearly a match. Your choice of words, and the describing adjectives are so much more genuine when it comes to B&E. Joshwin is sweet, loving and a true anchor - but isn't he more like a brother, after all? He seems to be feeling it too, since making love is so out of question. You would think that he would be eager to do it, after the commitment - and utimately, after coming clean with the lies.

    Well, we will se where you'll take this :) I LOVE your writing, can't say it enough times. /Malin

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